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Date: Dec 19, 2010
God's Sword
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Here's the prologue of my fan screenplay for Teen Titans, God's Sword.
Original story.

M: Sequences of intense fantasy violence, Thematic elements, sensuality, and a scene of brief partial nudity

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(Started: 8/6/10)

 

(Completed: 8/29/10)

 

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PROLOGUE

 

 


 

HEAVEN

 

It is above the clouds. Angels fly around, passing one another, commonly finding time to wave a friendly hello gesture. Some play harps; others lie back on the cloud surface relaxing, and basically, its paradise.

 

Narrator:

 

Heaven, undoubtedly the best place to be in the afterlife. Life in Heaven is very peaceful. Out of the many beings that live up here, the notable are God and his son, Jesus.

 

FADE TO:

 

INT. GODS PALACE

 

God is sitting on his throne in his royal, marble palace with a friendly smile on his face. He wears a snowy white tunic and grey sandals. He has a long, grey beard and a mustache that connects with sideburns to his grey hair.

 

Jesus stands next to him. He, too, has a long beard and a mustache that connects with his sideburns to his hair, but unlike Gods, its all brown hair. He, too, wears a snowy white tunic, but he wears tan brown sandals. Jesus, overall, looks much like a younger version of his father.

 

Narrator:

 

But wherever theres a good place, this always a bad place

 

CUT TO:

 

HELL

 

Hell differs strongly from Heaven in appearance. Its underneath the Earth near the most extreme depths of it. The walls of Hell are all red, along with the floor, which is constantly ablaze. People run in fear and/ or get tortured by horrifying- looking demons, and anything that causes pain.

 

Narrator:

 

And that bad is Hell. It is constant chaos here. People who have sinned badly throughout the lives are sent here in the afterlife. Hell in under the rule of the infamous Satan.

 

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Satan is standing in the middle of boulder jutting out of a river of magma. His skin is all red. He has red irises and flaming orange pupils in his evil eyes. He also owns a set of bull-like horns on his head and a scorpion-like pointed tail. The digits of his hands are long and thin, and the nails are razor sharp.

 

Narrator:

 

Satan has despised Gods ways of thinking ever since the beginning and he always wished he could enslave the Heavens and all of Earth. However, he had never been able to do so. Until one day

 

Satan calls on one of his demons.

 

Satan:

 

Damon!

 

Damon flies in and faces him.

 

Damon:

 

Yes, lord Satan?

 

Satan:

 

Send this scroll to God.

 

He hands Damon a scroll of parchment.

 

Damon:

 

I shall do so, your majesty.

 

Damon flies through the ceiling above.

 

FADE TO:

 

HEAVEN

 

EXT. GODS PALACE

 

In the Heavens, God is having a conversation with Jesus outside his palace when Damon appears through the clouds. His horrifying appearance, complete with his black, bat-like wings, terrify the local angels nearby as the fly for cover. God rises from his throne.

 

God:

 

Damon, you vile Hell angel! What have you come here for?

 

Damon:

 

Lord Satan wishes fro me to send you this scroll.

 

God takes the scroll and opens it to read the message. It reads:

 

God,

 

Tonight, I challenge you to a duel in the mountains near Jump City. Our choice weapons shall be swords. If you shall defeat me, I shall no longer disturb you ever again. And if I win, I shall take over the Heavens and the world, and I shall exile you from Heaven and send you into a status of Limbo.

 

Satan

 

He finishes the message.

 

God:

 

I shall engage in this duel. Now, be gone, Damon!

 

Damon flies away as God raises his arm towards him.

 

FADE TO:

 

HELL

 

Back in Hell, Damon meets Satan and tells him that God has agreed to the duel.

 

Satan:

 

That is fantastic news. Now, let us prepare for the duel.

 

Satan calls on several demons. He tells them that he must a sword constructed by tonight.

 

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HEAVEN

 

At the same time, God calls on two angels.

 

God:

 

Helena! Wanda!

 

The two angels are twin girls. They are stunningly beautiful in appearance.

 

Helena:

 

Yes, your majesty?

 

God:

 

I have a very important job for you.

 

Wanda:

 

What is it?

 

God:

 

I need you two build a sword for me. Do you think you can complete it by nightfall?

 

Wanda:

 

Why by nightfall?

 

God:

 

Satan wants to challenge me in a sword-fighting duel.

 

Helena:

 

Dont worry your majesty. Will build the best sword we can make for you.

 

Both in Heaven and Hell, both swords are being built. By nightfall, they are fully completed. In Heaven, the twins walk up to God.

 

Helena:

 

God

 

Helena, Wanda:

 

Good luck.

 

God:

 

Thanks, girls.

 

FADE TO:

 

HELL

 

Satan has his sword out. The blade is 2  feet long and is shiny black. The handle is red. He looks at the blade.

 

Satan:

 

Tonight, I shall rule.

 

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HEAVEN

 

Gods sword is much different. The blade is an exactly 4 feet in length and is made of shiny, solid gold with a handle made of shiny, reflective chrome.

 

He looks up from his sword.

 

God:

 

All peace shall remain.

 

FADE TO:

 

MOUNTAINS

 

Satan is waiting on the tip of the tallest mountain in the area. God arrives from the Heavens.

 

Satan:

 

Ah, God. I was beginning to think you wouldnt show. You always like to make a dramatic entrance, dont you?

 

God:

 

This is no time to be fooling around. We are here to do battle, are we not?

 

Satan:

 

We are most certainly here to battle. You are so wise. But lets see how fast you react!

 

He pulls out his sword very quickly and tries to strike God, but God was ready. He had pulled out his sword just in time to stop Satans.

 

Narrator:

 

The battle had begun. Minutes went by, feeling like hours for the two fighters. The sound of the swords clanging was heard throughout the nearby forest.

 

God and Satan then moved far apart from each other. They put their swords in front of them.

 

Satan and God then charged at each other, their roars long and loud. Satan put his sword over his head, preparing the final blow. God caught sight of this and, just as Satans sword was about to come down, God leaped into the air and cut the shiny black blade into two with his golden-bladed sword.

 

Satan:

 

No! My sword!

 

God got back up and looked at Satan.

 

God:

 

Now, Satan, you understand that you cant battle any longer with a destroyed sword, dont you?

 

Satan just eyed him evilly.

 

God:

 

The battle has ended. The Heavens and the Earth shall remain undisturbed. Now be gone, Satan!

 

Satan growled and disappeared. A lightening storm had begun as God returned to the Heavens.

 

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HELL- SEVEN MINUTES LATER

 

Banging his right fist to his head once, Satan was on his throne grumbling about the embarrassment of his defeat.

 

Satan:

 

How could I have lost?! I wouldve had him if hadnt done that to my sword! What do I do now?

 

He thought for several minutes.

 

Satan:

 

Ah! Damon!

 

Damon showed up.

 

Damon:

 

Yes your majesty?

 

Satan:

 

I wish for you to go up into the Heavens and get Gods sword for me. And be quiet, so you wouldnt wake them while you get it.

 

Damon:

 

Yes your majesty.

 

Damon raced to the Heavens.

 

FADE TO:

 

HEAVEN

 

Once he gets there, he quietly moves through the clouds, the angels undisturbed.

 

EXT. GODS PALACE

 

Reaching Gods palace, Damon flew to the roof.

 

INT. GODS PALACE

 

Sinking underneath it into the palace, Damon found it: the sword was hung on the wall right down the hall.

 

Damon: (whisper)

 

There you are.

 

He moved down the hall to the sword and carefully took it off the wall.

 

Damon: (whisper)

 

Jackpot!

 

FADE TO:

 

THE SKY

 

Soon, he was on his way out from the Heavens. A thunder and lightening storm began. Damon looked up in anger at two fingers in the darkened, briefly lighten sky.

 

Damon:

 

Thunder! Lightening! Will you end this damming storm!?

 

Lightening:

 

No one tells Thunder and Lightening to stop the job Mother Nature intended us to do!

 

Thunder:

 

Take this!

 

Thunder clapped his hands together and a shockwave-like sound of thunder came out. The force of it knocked Damon off his course and he accidentally shot the golden sword towards Titans Tower.

 

Damon:

 

No!

 

He raced after it, but the sword moved faster than he did.

 

Damon was about to grab the sword, but once it passed the edge of the forest, it vanished.

 

Damon:

 

What the?

 

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EXT. TITANS TOWER

 

The thunder and lightening continue on.

 

CUT TO:

 

INT. TITANS TOWER- RAVENS BEDROOM

 

In Titans Tower, everyone is asleep. One, however, is in for a rude awakening. In a dark, creepy bedroom, a teenage girl was lying in bed, undisturbed. She had shoulder length, violet-blue hair, pale grey skin, and a red jewel on her forehead. Her blue cloak was hung on the wall nearby.

 

Raven seemed to be in calm sleep, until she was awoken by a golden light. She glanced at it and dozed off again, but then she jerked up, seeing that it was a golden sword.

 

The light filled every dark corner of the bedroom. Her violet-blue eyes were drawn to this beautiful sight, but she was puzzled as to why a golden sword was floating above her bed. She curiously moved her hand to feel the sword.

 

As she grabbed the handle, though, she felt an enormous shock of intense power.

 

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[TEEN TITANS OPENING THEME]



-- Edited by DSS on Tuesday 21st of December 2010 10:11:36 AM

-- Edited by DSS on Tuesday 21st of December 2010 10:15:41 AM



-- Edited by DSS on Thursday 21st of April 2011 11:51:17 PM



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Cool story. Funny you and Travis both use script format.



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I have the full screenplay at FanFiction.Net...

Click here to read, enjoy!



-- Edited by DSS on Thursday 21st of April 2011 11:52:23 PM



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very well written and very exiting, wit many twists and turns that will keep you reading: Justin

10 out of 10



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scorpio213 wrote:

very well written and very exiting, wit many twists and turns that will keep you reading: Justin

10 out of 10


 Thank you very much! That means a lot to me. biggrin



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